A frightening experience

1) Read the exam tips on pages 95 to 104 from the book and organise the information in spider webs. This will help you study the characteristics of Narrative writing. Remember you 'll have to include them in your piece of wrting.



The package has arrived in  Timothy's house, the brightest and charming boy in Manchester, even though he was a little bit arrogant and stubborn. He was pale when he opened the box he entered to his house and later, he started yelling "Its finally here!!". Consequently his mother asked: "Has your Go-pro arrived?
- "Yes, and I'll go to give it a try!" Timothy said:
-"Fine, but return before midnight" answered his mother. Timothy immediately called his best friends Harry and John to go try the new camera: "Wait U in the park guys >-<"  he tested them. Once there, Timothy told them his idea.
- "Hey, we'll try this slice of future at Maxwells house"
-"What? Are you insane?" Harry exclaimed.
-"Come on, don't be coward lets go"
A desolate, spooky and goolmy house was in front of their eyes
- "I'm horrified" shouted john
- "Shut up and follow me" said Timothy with a frustrated tone
They surrounded the house first, then they jumped the fence.
- "Great, now turn the bloody camera on" said Harry violently.
Timothy did so, and afterwards, he entered through the window.
- "You know the owner of this house is dead, right?" John said
- "I know, and no one cares" Timmy answered in an indifferent way.
The house from the inside looked frightful, it was very cold and creepy. Besides, the lights turned on by themselves, however that didn't stop the attractive boy. After that, his friends entered.
- "What is this place?" asked John
Suddenly, a big piano fell off the stairs suspiciously. Absolutely frightened, they started tip-toeing and whispering with a quaint look in their faces. Out of the blue, a fearful man with a devilish shotgun started shouting in an exsasperated way and immediately started shooting. One shot hit Harry in his toe, who started hobbling his way out, while his friends ran away in a selfish act. Finally, once they where all outside, John and Timothy called an ambulance to take Harry, who was devastated. Timmy felt guilty for his friend's injury.